Second advisor's remarks on my proposal

[hani_backup]

I sent my proposal to my second advisor.  She wrote back:

"I've read through your proposal and the bulk of it looks good. I'm concerned about the first section  - your autobiography. The writing here seems disjointed and lacking clarity, and most of all, I'm not convinced that you are really excited about this. I think this section still needs work.

I've made a number of comments, using track changes, to get you started, but you should continue to work on this on your own as well.

Good luck."

*sigh* I have all my classes tomorrow, and so I need to finish their readings before I can even think of touching this proposal.  I know myself well enough that I could use this proposal as a procrastination tool on the readings and think I can skim along on in classes. No, must not do.

Hopefully I will somehow squeeze in time; the IDST committee meets every second Tuesday.  I can hope this week's Tuesday won't be the work for them.  

Too bad we don't get Monday off! Apparently Martin Luther King Jr. Day is a federal holiday my college doesn't give us!  Same with Labor Day in September.  (Which still takes me time to get used to.  I'm used to Labour/Labor Day being May 1st.)

Comments

[big-yellow-moon.livejournal.com]

No Lincoln's Birthday either?

[hani.livejournal.com]

Nope. The only days we get off this semester are spring break (first week of March), Spring Day (some day in April), and Student Symposium Day (also in April).